A Journey(This is my compo donno if its good rate and command thx!hope can get in the competiton!!)

This is my story, It happened to me two weeks ago which was my brother's eleventh Birthday. We were supposed to have a Barbecue party at the Botanical Garden but it got cancelled because of a last minute changes. So we decided to go on a Treasure Hunt near our House and our mother had warned us not go so far or we may get lost. As the oldest I have to take care of my younger brother in case he get lost, and my mother gave us the map to find the Treasure and some clues before we set out. When our mother had given us the map and clues we set out to find the Treasure.
The location on the map was at the park near our home it was at night, and our mother told us to come home early to sleep. When we went to the park it was deserted! I thought there will be some people but it was deserted totally, and my brother and I were very scared. We hold on to each other and went to find the Treasure. As we were walking we didn't even know someone or something were following us. When we found the red mark on the map we knew it was the Treasure. But as we were digging out for the Treasure, something caught my eye in the bushes and something was moving in the bushes. As we walked towards it, a wild dog came out and started barking and began to chase my brother and I.
We were screaming at the top of our lungs for help but there was no respond. The dog was still chaseing us when we were out of the park, we were reaching our house when the dog pounce on me and scratch my face with its paw. My brother quickly ran home and told my mother what had happend and my mother quickly called the dog catcher and within minutes the dog catcher took a net and caught the dog and put it in the van .
My mother quickly bring me to the nearest hospital to check if there is any infection on my face luckily it was nothing serious but that incident will always be with me.

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Made by Alexander Teow
(6A)Catholic High School Primery