Aloysius Tan's COMPO

Aloysius Tan did this at my house. he wrote like this:
James was drinking his bottle of milk. He left his bottle on the edge of the balcony when “Ring Ring,”the telephone rang. James rushed in to pick it up. When James was on the telephone, he felt a gust of wind .When he looked across, he realized his bottle was no longer on the balcony edge. Then he slammed down the telephone and dashed to the balcony.

When James look down, he saw his neighbouring on the floor. Shards of glass lay scattered all over the road. Mr tan looked deathly pale and blood was oozing from a gash on his head. Mr tan felt a warm trickle of blood down his face. With excruciating pain, Mr tan fainted clean away. Nathan’s heart was in his mouth. His legs trembled like jelly. He fidgeted anxiously.

People nearby quickly called the police and the ambulance. Luckily, Mr Tan was sent to hospital just in time as Mr tan was seriously injured in the head. The police got hold of James as the police found James’s thumbprints on the bottle of milk. James did admitted that he put the bottle of milk of the balcony edge but he did not push or throw the bottle down the building.

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